Comments on: Help me chose a summary statement http://seedingthecity.org/help-me-chose-a-summary-statement a plan for greening the urban expanse Thu, 04 Dec 2008 16:52:15 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.6.5 By: Liz http://seedingthecity.org/help-me-chose-a-summary-statement#comment-10 Liz Wed, 27 Feb 2008 21:45:17 +0000 http://seedingthecity.org/help-me-chose-a-summary-statement/#comment-10 I do like THIS line from the second one, though. "It capitalizes on community building to introduce urban environmental issues and remediation tools." I do like THIS line from the second one, though. “It capitalizes on community building to introduce urban environmental issues and remediation tools.”

]]> By: Liz http://seedingthecity.org/help-me-chose-a-summary-statement#comment-9 Liz Wed, 27 Feb 2008 21:44:04 +0000 http://seedingthecity.org/help-me-chose-a-summary-statement/#comment-9 DEFINITELY the first. Much more reader-friendly. DEFINITELY the first. Much more reader-friendly.

]]> By: Kelly http://seedingthecity.org/help-me-chose-a-summary-statement#comment-4 Kelly Sat, 02 Feb 2008 22:29:38 +0000 http://seedingthecity.org/help-me-chose-a-summary-statement/#comment-4 I second the second one. I second the second one.

]]> By: Margo http://seedingthecity.org/help-me-chose-a-summary-statement#comment-3 Margo Sat, 02 Feb 2008 01:10:09 +0000 http://seedingthecity.org/help-me-chose-a-summary-statement/#comment-3 I like the first 2 sentences of the 2nd one but the 1st one from "Included in the modules..." You can't expect a straughforward answer from me for an either or question!;) I like the first 2 sentences of the 2nd one but the 1st one from “Included in the modules…”

You can’t expect a straughforward answer from me for an either or question!;)

]]> By: Jenn http://seedingthecity.org/help-me-chose-a-summary-statement#comment-2 Jenn Mon, 21 Jan 2008 19:28:21 +0000 http://seedingthecity.org/help-me-chose-a-summary-statement/#comment-2 I like the 2nd one better -- I think it's a little clearer. YAY! I like the 2nd one better — I think it’s a little clearer. YAY!

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